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Y5 Newspaper Writing - 14th January 2021
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Hannah Campbell
10:40
The luxury passenger liner, the Titanic, has hit an almighty iceberg in the North Atlantic Ocean.
Alisha
10:41
I'm confused
B Hard
10:41
Mrs Hard Test
Guest
10:41
The Titanic has sadly sank from hitting an iceberg.It sank in the north Atlantic ocean.Crew ans passengers went missing.(700 people particular)
Hannah Campbell
12:18
Could you put your adverb at the start of the sentence?

"Sadly, the Titanic has sunk"
Darcy
10:41
In the middle of the Atlantic ocean, a passenger liner, the Titanic, is called the unsinkable, but has gone down after hitting a mighty iceberg.
Hannah Campbell
12:19
You could get rid of the words 'is' and 'but' here Darcy :)
Ava
10:41
The
ioab
10:41
titanic crash only 700 suvivors thousands dead by captin not listening to passangers
Hannah Campbell
12:19
Don't forget your punctuation!
Sophia
10:42
A ship of dreams called Titanic ( a floating five star hotel) on her maiden voyage from southampton to New York sank half way on her luxuroius journey.
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Hannah Campbell
12:20
There are some wonderful ideas here, I love the use of the brackets! But you need to make sure the sentence makes sense.

"A ship of dreams called Titanic (a floating five star hotel) has sadly crashed on her maiden voyage from Southampton to New York."
Imogen
10:42
The luxury cruise liner, the Titanic has hit a gigantic iceberg in the middle of the North Atlantic Ocean.
Lillie SJPS
10:42
Today, there are no survivors left ,The last survivor Millvina Dean, who was just two months old at the time of the tragedy, died in 2009 at the age of 97
Holly Webb 🎀
10:42
Without warning the captian drives as fast as a lightning bolt and crashes.
Hannah Campbell
12:20
Don't forget your commas after your fronted adverbials.
Alexia
10:42
The luxury passenger liner,the Titanic,has sadly crashed into an iceberg in the North Atlantic Ocean.
Seb
10:43
Unfortunately, the   Titanic sank in the middle of the Atlantic ocean after an iceberg opened the hull.
Lillie SJPS
10:43
At 32 degrees, the iceberg was warmer than the water Titanic passengers fell into that night. The ocean waters were 28 degrees, below the freezing point but not frozen because of the water's salt content.
ioab
10:43
crash titanic hit iceburg suvirous only 700 and 1000s dead
Joshua
10:43
The Titanic has hit an Ice Berg! 6 water compartments are open, I think the unsinkable ship is going down! (2:30 hours later).Titanic has sank 700 die!
Declan
10:43
Without warning, the luxury liner, the Titanic, has struck an almighty iceberg in the middle of the North Atlantic Ocean. Of the 2200 passengers, it's reported only 700 survived.
6666
10:43
this wonderful ship has sank in the ocean.
Hannah Campbell
12:21
Don't forget your punctuation!
danni
10:43
There is no hope left.People have lost loved ones.Only 700 people have survived.
MACEY jAYE MORGAN
10:44
IN THE ATLANTIC OCEAN, THE TITANIC A LUXURIOUS SHIP SADLY HIT A ICE BERG.
Jake
10:44
Unfortunately the titanic sank on its firs voyage.
Hannah Campbell
12:21
Don't forget your commas after your adverbs and capital letter on Titanic :)
Joshua
10:44
Titanic fails to get to New York City! :(
Lillie SJPS
10:44
30 knots – the estimated speed (around 35 mph / 56 km/h) at which the bow of the Titanic would have hit the ocean floor, taking many poor victims with her. 20° – the angle at which the bow hit the bottom as Titanic sank
Charlie
10:44
the luxury passenger liner, the titanic, has sadly c
Sophia
10:44
there is nothing left but a sadly loss of hopeless life...
harley
10:44
Sadly thousands dead from this deadly iceberg and only 300 survive
Joshua
10:44
Captain goes down with the ship.....
Ava
10:44
he wary wonders..      In the Bermuda triangle , a tragedy happen in the Atlantic ocean
Hannah Campbell
12:22
Punctuation Ava!
Darcy Rumble
10:45
The Titanic sadly sank in the North Atlantic Ocean and 706 people out of 2200 survived
Guest
10:45
On the way to New York City,The biggest boat in history crashs trerribley
Joshua
10:45
ICE BERG AHEAD!
chase
10:45
On her madien voage unsinkible Titanic sadly sunk into the ocean
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