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Dylan Harvey
8:36
The creepy, old shack creaked slowly as the gloomy grey rain drops fell from the sky splashing on the miserable, lonley people who sat crying on the floor.
Anais and William
8:36
On top of the old, leaky house the clouds gathered together to make a storm over the shattered house.
Oliver and Joana
8:36
The broken, deserted house sat there with its lights glooming through the windows.
Grace & Willow
8:34
To Lily and Alex, absolutely love your description of the sunset! Really captures the scenery in the readers mind!
Natalie and Amy.
8:22
The astonishing, lava-like sky was hovering above the lonely girl who was searching through though the magical ocean.
Benjamin and Ellis
8:21
The gloomy ,vast  house was reflected in the crystallized puddles.
Sienna and Zane
8:20
This sentence chilled us to the bone! [in a good way] Amazing emphasis and you never put a foot wrong! Do we suspect two new J.K Rowling's here? We think we do!!
James and Harry
8:20
I liked Alex and Lilly,s because they have very strong adjectives and lots of detail.
Grace & Willow
8:20
The pitch black, mysterious sky hung over the abandoned council estate flat, like nobody was there. The telegraph poles almost slamming down to the ice-cold floor swayed raspingly in the stormy, night sky wind.
Alex and Lily
8:19
The tedious, gloomy sky hung like a controlled puppet. In the middle of the treacherous road a giant puddle grew whilst reflecting the lighting-bolt clouds.
Dylan Harvey
8:19
The stormy, angry sky sang deeply over the abandoned, old house quietly...
Natalie and Amy.
8:19
No one would dare to walk through the treacherous and spine chilling street, the stormy weather doesn't help anything, especially when it rains poison. People go in; no one comes out of it...
Mrs Lee
7:02
Wow! Keep it up!
Ryan and Alfie
7:02
The haunted house stood cold and empty, like the old soul, who used to live there.
Mrs Lee
7:01
A cliff-hanger!!!!!!!
Martha and Chloe
7:01
Deserted, in the remote village, was an abandoned, warn down house, with puddles reflecting the dark and stormy night but it wasn't what anyone else would presume at first glance, BUT who said it was abandoned?
Mrs Lee
7:01
Amazing, boys! I love the energy from your clever word choices!
Elliot and Sam
7:01
The spaghetti like electric wires, flickered with electric energy that could have electrocuted someone walking in the gloomy, never-ending pathway.
Tia and Evie
7:00
As the sun sets the waves drift across the orange ocean.
Zane and Sienna
6:59
The weeping,coal-black clouds floated above the brittle, abandoned apartment block.
Mrs Lee
6:59
Absolutely fantastic girls! Such clever vocabulary choices! You need a comma after puddles.I am so impressed!
Grace & Willow
6:59
The gloomy, iron-grey sky hung over the abandoned, empty street. Dotted over the rough, clammy road puddles lay fresh and glistening from the harsh rainstorm. Two single cars drove down the mundane roads, headlights like the sun, so bright in the darkness. Street lamps stood dead still in the darkness, orange lights feeding the last of their life to the darkness. The telegraph poles creaked dangerously in the wind, the harsh black wires tangled after the storm...
Benjamin and Ellis
6:57
The phantom, whitish clouds hung across the a ghostly house.
Anais and William
6:57
The deep, treacherous puddles with cars sinking in the rippling water, looked menacing.
oliver and joana
6:56
The abandoned house sat there under the gloomy sky.
Mrs Lee
6:56
Fantastic sentence! Can you check your punctuation please?
John and Declan
6:56
the haunted dual house reflected from the puddles and the lamposts where twitching from the mood of the day
James and Harry
6:55
The bright glowing horizon shines through the old dusty village, with the shining water reflecting on the beautiful sun.
Dylan Harvey
6:55
The gloomy, dull sky floated over the shabby house looking like it was going to fall down at any minute.
James and Harry
6:55
The bright glowing sun, as beautiful as a fossil, shone through the old dusty village, while the shining water reflecting the fluffy, pillow clouds rippled through the sunset.
Sienna and Zane
6:54
Love it, Grace and Willow! Not sure the word sunset needs a comma afterwards, but other than that brilliant
Mrs Lee
6:54
You have captured the mood with slash!!
Dylan Harvey
6:54
The deep, car washing puddles sat waiting to slash at any moment.
Grace & Willow
6:53
The mesmorising view of  the rustic fisherman's hut, sunk as the alluring sun set down to the creature-full sea!
Anais and William
6:53
The creamy colored house stood in the middle of the shiny glamorous sea that looks like molten lava.
Mrs Lee
6:53
A thoughtfully written description. Well done boys!
Ryan and Alfie
6:53
The man peered at the glistening sea, wondering what was under there. The sun made the tips of the waves gold and bright like a sparkling ring.
Dylan Harvey
6:52
The new, rickety beach house as pale as a paper airplane flying at the sun. The pier looks as sturdy as iron as the man joyfully watches the sun set
Benjamin and Ellis
6:52
The orange, phenomenal view stood above the twinkling crystallizing  water.
Mrs Lee
6:52
Super!
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