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Miss Williams
9:51
Good morning, everybody.
Can you help me write an effective character description of Jessie.
9:52
Brooke
9:52
Jessie hair cascaded down like a waterfall in a jungle.
Miss Williams
9:53
Brooke: could you have a look at Jessie and include a possessive apostrophe please
Brooke and ellie
9:55
Jessie’s hair cascaded down melodically as she stood on ship as it sailed over the marine blue sea.
Miss Williams
9:55
Brooke and Ellie: could you punctuate your adjectives please
Heidi
9:56
Jessie is a sweet, little girl that has rosy-red cheeks.
Miss Williams
9:56
Heidi: can you think of a more powerful adjective for little
Jaden , Jack and zefali
9:56
Jessie had beautiful hazel, brown hair that fell gracefully down her shoulders.
Owen and zona
9:57
Jessie, who had a difficult life when her parents died, went on an expedition to America.
Kelyce+Carl
9:57
Her chocolate brown over coat was thick and fluffy.
Brooke and ellie
9:57
Jessie’s jacket moved swiftly in the mist as the wind flooded the air.
Miss Williams
9:58
Describe her appearance
Ayngel & Barsam
9:58
Jessie is a young girl who is very shy,sweet and caring for others.
Miss Williams
9:59
Punctuate your relative clause, please Ayngel and Barsam
Jaden , Jack and zefali
9:59
Once there was a beautiful, loyal girl that left her home to go to America for a rabbi in there city.
Max and liley
9:59
Jessie’s eye’s are chocolate brown.
Miss Williams
9:59
Max and Liley; could you tell me more about her chocolate brown eyes please
10:00
What do they do?
Kelyce+Carl
10:00
Jessie has hazel brown eyes that shimmer everywhere.
Thomas Erdis
10:00
Jessie was determined that she didn’t want to go.
Alfie & Haneen
10:00
Jessie (who has a awbuurn flowing hair, which cascades down her neck) leaves her beloved  grandmother heart Broken whilst she’s away in America.
Miss Williams
10:01
Thomas and Erdis, more description please.
How is she feeling?
Brooke and ellie
10:01
Jessie is a kind,generous young girl who takes care of her beloved grandmother.
Miss Williams
10:02
Jaden; which ‘there’ would you use here?
Tara and Nathan
10:02
Jessie was a slim, beautiful young girl with relentless, hazel hair that cascaded down her shoulders. Her startling, emerald eyes glimmered beneath drooping lashes and a thick shawl was draped around her neck. The shy, nervous soul, whose eyes gazed out to the glassy, endless ocean, swayed along to the swell of the bobbing boat.
Owen and zona
10:03
Her auburn brown locks, which was tidily tucked underneath her cream ear, cascaded down past her bony shoulders.
Miss Williams
10:04
Owen and Zona; check your verb form
Heidi
10:05
Jessie is a sweet, miniature girl that has rosy-red cheeks, her eyes are chocolate-brown that gaze over the shimmering ocean.
Brooke and ellie
10:05
Jessie -who was a splendid young girl- stumbled as she got the shocking news from the mysterious Rabbi.
Heidi
10:05
Miss Williams: Jessie is a sweet, miniature girl with chocolate-brown eyes that gaze over the shimmering ocean.
Max and liley
10:06
Jessies chocolate brown glaze in the sun
Jessie’s chocolate brown eyes stared into the marine blue paradise.
Alfie & Haneen
10:07
Jessie’s,  loyal heart was broken, the shy poor frightened soul jumped out of her body as she found out the news she was going to America.
FARIS!
10:07
Jessie is a lovely girl who looks after her beloved grandmother.
Jaden , Jack and zefali
10:07
In a poor city lived a girl with her grandma. She has penetrating eyes that could fill your heart, straight hazel hair that cascades down her shoulders and a caring loyal personality.
Owen and zona
10:07
Jessie, who was an emotional mess, was told the horrific news of going on an expedition to america
David
10:08
Jessie was shocked when the Rabie said I onset you to go to America.
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