JotCast | Live Writing Session

Live Writing Session

David Mitchell

11:10

Good morning Year 6!

Derek and Eric

11:33

Good afternoon Mr. Mitchell!

David Mitchell

11:35

11:38

Show off some of your amazing sentences Year 6!

Emily and Safa

11:39

The misty cold breeze in the air the air is hugging the fresh trees.

David Mitchell

11:40

Emily and Safa - I like how the mist is hugging the trees. Can you now describe the water for me?

Mahanoor

11:40

With misty fog surrounding the trees, the icy water in the lake softly rippled onto the snowy banks.

David Mitchell

11:41

Mahanoor - Softly rippled is making me think that all is calm. I like that! Now tell me about the sky.

Emily and Safa

11:41

the wintery weather is making the view of the lake fade in with the amazing fogy mists.

David Mitchell

11:41

Emily and Safa - Don't forget your capital letters.

Zayan and Kulsum

11:41

In the mist of the forest, a rippled lake showed the reflection of the trees that stood still like a statue.

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

11:41

I CAN FEEL THE WIND BLOW MY MIND AS I LOOK AT THE AMAZING FROZEN RIVER.

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

11:41

The mist grew thicker as the boy trotted past the white,icy bank that could be mistaken for a sheet of paper just hot off the press.

Esa and Gift

11:41

The frozen lake looked like it went on forever with the proud trees standing watching and the snow falling steadily.

Amberin and Devon

11:41

As the water rippled, the trees swayed in the misty forest, covering the mysterious creature hidden in the snow.

Breshna and Ahmad

11:41

It's a fogy day in the snowy forest.

David Mitchell

11:42

Esa and Gift - I like the personification!

Raihan and Sajjad

11:42

The steamy mist wrapped itself around the lonely tree casting a reflection on the ice cold water.

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

11:42

The still lake stood like a statue in the middle of town ready to be tipped.

Mahanoor

11:42

The pale, blue sky was empty and cold; all of the things that the sky was above became lifeless and frozen.

Rebeka and Ayesha

11:42

As the mist, met shimmering lake, the glistening snow gently touched the river bank.

Emily and Safa

11:42

Thank you Mr Mitchel for your advice !

David Mitchell

11:43

Rebeka and Ayesha - I like that, read it back though, is there a word missing?

Faiz and Saleeka

11:43

The white , damp mist covered the clouds with its immense beauty. The icy , frozen lake covers the aquamarine water with its cold hugs. The trees held there heads high keeping good posture.

David Mitchell

11:43

Faiz and Saleeka - I love the aquamarine water!

Eman and Abdullah

11:43

The misty and frozen trees swayed in the foggy distance as a creature stared at me.

Amberin and Devon

11:43

The beautiful reflection of the towering trees danced elegantly as the cold breeze swept across the isolated forest.

Rebeka and Ayesha

11:45

As the mist, met the shimmering lake, the glistening snow touched the river bank.

Emily and Safa

11:45

THE SNOW AS SOFT AS A FLUFFY CLOUD .

Mariya B and Hussain

11:45

The cold breeze made the trees in the misty Forest sway from side to side and made soft ripples in the frosty lake.

Muhammad-Q and Sandor

11:45

The boy, who was being followed by a gang of thieves, had a maroon leather jacket with home knitted gloves and a pocket full of coins ready to be spent.

MUBARRA AND SOFIA

11:45

THE TREE MAKE ME FEEL THE AMAZING NATURE.

David Mitchell

11:45