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Mrs Hamlin
1:18
Can you describe this room full of treasures?
1:24
For example: The wide, bottle-green trunk lay in the centre of the dusty library.
Archie
1:27
Hi
Charlie
1:27
Hello mrs Hamlin
Katie
1:27
Hello it is Katie
Nevaeh
1:27
Hello Mrs Hammilin,its Nevaeh.
lexie
1:27
Hi
Lily
1:27
Hi Mrs Hamlin its Lily
lexie
1:27
Hi its Lexie
Neena
1:28
Hi mrs Hamlin it is Neena
Kyle
1:28
Hi mrs Hamlin its Kyle
Joseph
1:28
Hi it's Joseph
Nevaeh
1:29
The clock ticked away in the corner.
Mrs Hamlin
1:33
Excellent! Can you add more detail?
lexie
1:29
The Old man who was holding an old rustic walking stick.
Mrs Hamlin
1:29
The old man was holding an old, rustic walking stick.
Thomas
1:29
Hi its tom
Archie
1:30
The room is full of old clocks and cupboards ,
Mrs Hamlin
1:30
Can you change this to past tense?
Lily
1:30
The golden chandilier glistens in the sunlight
Mrs Hamlin
1:32
chandelier - excellent word choice!
Joseph
1:31
The room looks old because not that many people have chandiliers any more and the books look a bit rusty
Mrs Hamlin
1:34
Can books be rusty? Is there another word you could use?
Kyle
1:31
It looks like it is a shop that sells old thing from the past.
Mrs Hamlin
1:35
Instead of "things", what can you see?
Alfie
1:31
Hi miss its alfie
Thomas
1:31
Its anttiq
Mrs Hamlin
1:31
antique
Thomas
1:31
the clock is ticing slowly
Mrs Hamlin
1:35
ticking - Well done Thomas!
lexie
1:31
The stain glass window glistened in the distance(which stung my eyes).
Mrs Hamlin
1:36
You used brackets!
Nevaeh
1:31
The sun blazed through the windows.
Mrs Hamlin
1:36
blazed is a powerful word
Lewis
1:32
Hello it's Lewis
Archie
1:32
The golden rusty chandelier was floating like a helicopter,
Mrs Hamlin
1:37
Wow! Great simile Archie!
Grace j
1:32
Hi Mrs Hamilin its GraceJ
Alfie
1:32
The room is ancient because no one go's in there
Mrs Hamlin
1:37
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