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3rd July
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9:10
Carter stared around the empty Square, already the sun was rising over the horizon.
John - Lancaster
9:11
Bill ran into the darkened alley, buildings towered on both sides closing in on him.
Timmy
9:12
The city looks like a mincraft sand villige
Emily wallder summerfields
9:12
There was a clearing ahead, there were tall Mayan building that towered over you,there was at least 12 buildings and some Mayan pyramids, Donna was sure she saw a statue blink...
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:12
Summerfields - think about the Ancient Maya ruins we watched in the documentary....
John - Lancaster
9:12
Timmy - what's a minecraft village? describe it.
Harry summerfeilds primary
9:12
Harry darted, Stumbling over stalls. Knocking over precious, Colourful exotic fruits.He sprinted towards the bridge.
Ryee summerfiels
9:13
Jeff walked in the rain and saw a movement but he could not tell what it was.
John - Lancaster
9:13
Harry - commas and full stops - edit.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:13
Harry - good verb choices.
Lily Belmont
9:13
Lucy stood in the middle of a sand pit sinking in Ashe she stared. She saw something....
Miss Agar- Hedon
9:13
Hedon - try and use similes, personification and imagery like we have been in poetry this week.
Emma Hedon
9:13
Emily stared at the empty city: shocked.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:13
Rylee - what type of movement did he see?
Ethan and Alberto
9:14
Aston was in a dark gloomy alley on a stormy night when a lightning bolt stuck just inches away from his feet
Riley bartlett river meed
9:14
David ran and ran but he knew he wasn't going to make it..........
John - Lancaster
9:14
Emma - what can she see?
libby hedon
9:14
Dainel stared at the big blasting wind.
Mr Hackett- Beecroft
9:14
Ryee- describe the movements. How could you build suspense?
Tegan - Rivermead
9:14
Maya ran into a dark alley. The storm was closing in. There wasn't much time left.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:14
Riley - love the ellipsis!
Jeff
9:14
It looks amazing like a fry
John - Lancaster
9:14
Ethan and Alberto - what did the lightning flash reveal?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:14
Tegan - love the short sentences for impact.
Miss Agar- Hedon
9:15
Libby- you probably wouldn't see the wind but you would feel it so what could it feel like against Daniel's face?
Melody - Summerfields
9:15
Emma ran over to the fruit stall. She swore she heard someone talking to her... she looked around but didnt see anyone...
Ruby-Hedon
9:15
Kerry stood still .silence
Bailey-Belmont.
9:15
Timmy crashed through the light peach door without thinking what will be behind the unknown
John - Lancaster
9:15
Libby - can you see wind?
Oakleigh Summerfields
9:15
Gorge peered round the corner to see a some sort of Mayan warrior with a spear but when he got to the Mayan warrior but it was just a stature. But suddenly Gorge saw a blink.
Harry summerfiel primary
9:15
Harry saw the bridge crack. It tumbled splashing into the blue gleaming water.
Mayzee - Hedon Primary
9:15
Tim was in a dark silent allie  nobody to be seen but then he saw something in the distance.
MrG
9:15
Riley. How was your character feeling?
Louie Summerfields
9:15
Daniel stared at the huge stone towers and massive wooden gate he stated to run towards the gate over the massive sand dunes when he noticed a black Land rover Discovery with men holding guns with out thinking Daniel ran towards the village just as the men fired.
Lexi Belmont
9:15
Jimmy sprinted past houses that clambered over him from ever direction there was a house there was some thing or some one chasing him. He reached a dead end then that’s when some thing mysterious happened.
Olivia, summerfields
9:15
Mike ran trying not to look back at the poacher chasing him. he ran into the abandoned, ancient building. slammed the door and splashed into the lake in front of him. he saw something maybe a crocodile????????...................................
Hayden, Summerfields
9:15
Blake was wondering carelessly through the darkened tunnel when he had discovered a pair of suspicious looking people, getting closer and closer when suddenly...
Miss Agar- Hedon
9:15
Mayzee- use commas.
Ryee summerfiels
9:15
With out thinking Jeff went to see what the movement was.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
9:15
Louie - punctuation!
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