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2nd June Live Writing Session
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AvatarDavid Mitchell
9:04
Good morning Bloggers! Welcome to this LIVE writing session. Please add your first name and school name in the name box and don't post anything until you have heard all the instructions from David and Pie.
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Mrs VB
10:13
Love to read and comment on the children's writing - they are all so creative and enthusiastic!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:13
Please feel free to comment on the children's writing Miss VB.
Rayyan
10:13
In the boat made of Pearls dolphins swim around gracefully
Rosie
10:14
Shining silver birch, crystals, spiders cobwebs.
Sachin
10:14
On the magical boat of a wand's sparkle, the moonlight grabs onto the billowing sails.
Oscar
10:14
My boat would be made of light shining in a ravine.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:14
The magical boat would be made of Night, with sails that twinkled in the sun. It dances over the dark waves like a shooting star in the inky-black sky.
Chloe-SWW
10:14
My boat is made out of joy, and peace sprinkled with stardust and nature.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:14
The ghoulish galleon was made from horror and driftwood, tied together with souls who drive it, invisible to the naked eye. The clouds loomed down, as though trying to pluck it from the water.
Freya W
10:14
The boat made of moonlight sails past water lilies on a midnight lake.
Amelia.E
10:14
The boat made of diamonds, glistening and sparkling the ocean  of silence.
Shreesha
10:14
The boat of peacefulness.
JessW Micklefield 6M
10:14
In boat of Pixie Dust the lights flicker
Jack G
10:14
The boat made of lightbulbs.
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:14
On the boat of wonder i saw waves crash.
Utkarsha-Warren Road.
10:14
My magical boat is made out of words sailing through authors.
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School
10:14
On the world of adventure , it’s rainbow materials glistened into the the midnight sky .
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Rayyan - wonderful idea! How could the pearls be used further?
Mrs Shirtliff
10:14
Bethany - I like that idea of the boat dancing.
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Shreesha - how would the boat made of peacefulness sail?
keerat
10:15
The boat made of soles that all the hero's that fort on that boat with a lot of
Dean Binnie
10:15
My boat is made of enchanted gold that is blinding in the light.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:15
On the boat of flowers, the bees help about. The sunlight glistens the petalled sail.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:15
Oops; I changed tense!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:15
Well spotted - Great when we can evaluate our own writing.
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:15
In the boat of football, footballs are used for decorations
Amelia R home lingfield primary
10:15
Hi,this bout is not like any other covered in diamonds.
Sam SwW
10:15
In the boat made of midnight,
Sachin
10:15
On the boat of amethyst, lapis lazui melts on the deck.
CJ
10:15
On the boat made of the last breath of the dead, their souls float, glowing like lanterns.
LuisWRPS
10:15
In the boat of shining sparks, fire burns within...
Mrs Kilgour
10:15
Dean - what other powers would the 'gold' bring to the boat?
Benjamin sww
10:15
The boat made of light and water.
Felix F
10:16
The ship is made of shining fish scales.
Bethan from Warren Road
10:16
In the boat of lies, I searched for the truth I longed for.
Isla
10:16
Without the ores, we had to use our hands. When a boat made of wonder, what could we do?
Mrs Shirtliff
10:16
Ameilai, tell more about your boat covered in diamonds. It sounds lovely.
Freddie Chorley St james
10:16
The boat, is slowly sailing into the dark valley. The wind howling whilst the white doves fly over gracefully.
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