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1st June Live Writing Session
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AvatarDavid Mitchell
8:58
Good morning Bloggers! Welcome to the LIVE writing session. Please add your first name to the 'Name' box at the bottom of this window and wait for your instructions from David and Pie.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
8:59
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Jack Davey
10:04
The two cats pounced like kangaroos chasing each other.
Sachin
10:04
Xar stared into the distance. The snow-prowler buried itself in the deep sludge.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:04
Tail floater
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:04
It was approaching me. Its fur like a cloud. Its teeth as sharp as a sharks glare. I was scared...
Lottie Stockland Primary
10:05
as fast as a rocket
Fran
10:05
The snow cats feet kicked up the snow as they thundered past me.
Rosie
10:05
The whiskers were as thin as invisible string.
Tilly/ palace wood.
10:05
The eyes are as black as the night. The eyes twinkled like the stars.
Amelia R
10:05
As soft as a rabbit.
Felicia Q
10:05
The whiskers are as thin as paper.
Clare Bispham Drive Junior
10:05
Whiskers as sensitive as the hairs on a Venus Fly trap.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:05
Tail Twitcher
Douglas
10:05
As silent as snow.
Eleanor
10:05
As silent as a panther
Jodie- Bowness on solway primary
10:05
Their spots were like dark berry stains on their skin
Anastasia
10:05
Jumping Dots
Isla
10:05
The two snowcats pounded on each other fighting for the meat.
Thomas G
10:05
The icy hunter padded across the snow as silent s
Mrs Kilgour
10:05
Sachin - great use of a kenning as Pie suggested!
10:06
Thomas - just check that you have finished the sentence before you hit send!
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:06
Adults, please feel free to comment on the writing just like Mrs Kilgour has done.
Jessica
10:06
The majestic snow cat's eyes pierce into you, pierce into yours, showing their power over us.
Mr Walker
10:06
Rosie - great idea: invisible string.
Aiden
10:06
As cute as a dog
Florence - Weldon
10:06
Claws as sharp as razor blades
Nicholas Sing'ombe Warren Road
10:06
The two cats where as silent as water.
Hannah from Year 5
10:06
Their eyes sparkled in the gentle evening light.
Emily
10:06
As soft as blanket
Erin~ava
10:06
The cat eyes surrounded bye the fur that clashed against the fierce cold snow.
Sebastien SwW
10:06
It's eyes were pools of amber.
Joseph 10
10:06
The snow Leopard's skin is as soft as a pillow.
Bethany (10)
10:06
The snowcats are snow-crunchers, night-hunters, stealth-masters.
Utkarsha
10:06
The snow cat’s leap is as long as a four metre snake.
Sam- Tockwith Primary
10:06
fur as dense as the deepest forest
Sachin
10:06
The fur-ripper hissed and sniffed into the frosty air.
Mr Walker
10:06
Nicholas - ‘as silent as water’ is a superb idea.
Simi
10:06
The cat was as swift as a golden eagle
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